Sagittarius

Hello, I saw a few simple fixes I thought I could point out. Simply think about the arms and torso as big cylinders and I think your work will improve a lot! Also, think about the jaw line and how far it comes out. I tried to keep your style with my redline. I think your horse form reads well and is well balanced, all but the front leg which cannot bend forward as far as you have it. Even at full extension a horse's leg can only be straight.
Hope I could help!